Plot
Justin stayed in his hometown. He had married twice already. He was now on his third marriage with a baby boy on the way. But his wife cheated on him with his brother. He is unsure if he is the baby’s father. He already had older two boys. He has his own coffee business. He never forgot about Veronica but he moved on with his life.
A few months down the road Veronica and Justin met again at Veronica’s hotel and sparks flew again. But they were respectful towards each other and did not try to rekindle their love. They found out that their significant other were siblings. That gave them more reason not to pursue anything and keep their distant.
1. Veronica-
She is such a kind-hearted person. She’s adventurous but at the same time very mature and responsible. She tries very hard to make the right choices in her life. She’s a Harvard graduate. She’s really smart. She pretty much has it all beauty and smarts.
2. Justin-
He is tall with an athletic fit body. He’s very toned not over built. He has such beautiful abs. He’s very well groomed and clean-cut. He has short black hair and a goatee. He has such dreamy green eyes. He has a caramel complexion.
3. Jason-
He’s slim and tall. He has blondish light brown hair with gray eyes. He has no facial hair. His body was very well built. He had strong long hands and legs.
Scene-
Late Thursday evening Justin had been waiting at home for his wife, Shirley to arrive from the hospital. She had just seen the doctor for an amino. They had been waiting for the fetus to be old enough to get tested. Justin was losing his patience. He started to assume that the baby must not be his because Shirley has not contacted him yet. He decided to go to Veronica’s place. He needed to talk to someone. He couldn’t think of anyone to go to but Veronica.
He arrived to her home. He steps of his 2009 black Mercedes Benz. He’s wearing jeans with a white collared shirt and a navy blue blazer. He walks up the stairs and knocks the door. “Who’s there? called out Veronica. “It’s Justin” he said. He has his hands in pockets. He was upset but at the same time nervous. Veronica opens the door. She was still wearing her work clothes. She had a dark gray pencil skirt that hugged her curves tightly and a black blouse that showed just enough cleavage.” Come in. What brings you here? she asked curiously. He walks in the doorway and takes her into his arms and kissed her passionately. Veronica pushes away him furiously and yells “What’s wrong with you?! You’re a married man with a kid on the way and you are married to my boyfriend’s sister. How could u do that? She walks away from him. He follows her and responds “I won’t be married for long. We had an amino done to figure out who is the real father of her baby. She hasn’t called me to let me know it’s me so that must mean she’s sharing the news with my brother. This loveless marriage will be over. We can be together now.” Veronica shakes her head in disagreement and says “I’m sorry to hear that but what makes you think that I want to be with you. I’m with Jason now. You had your chance with me when we were younger and you blew it.” “I know I’m so sorry. That was one of the biggest mistake I ever made in my life. But you didn’t even fight for me. You left this town and you are back. I feel like this is our second chance. I also think you are dating Jason to make me jealous. It has working.” He walks closer to her and grabs her face. Veronica began to tremble with his touch. It was obvious she still had feelings for him. “ I left because I didn’t know what else to do. You were my whole life and I thought our love was real and strong. I’m a different person now. I’ve moved on and I’m doing good on my own.” She pulls his hands from her face but kept looking deep in his eyes and said “You really hurt me and I won’t do the same to Jason”. He replies “ Veronica you don’t love him. You’re using him to get to me. I want to be with you. I never stopped loving you. And with that he kissed her again. This time she doesn’t pull away. She gives in. She started to remember his kisses.
The door opened and Jason walks in. Justin and Veronica were taken aback. “What the hell is going on here?! he yells. “I can explain” Veronica said. “He came in to tell me that your sister is not having his baby and he’s divorcing her”. “What!? Does that gives him the right for him to started kissing you? I can’t believe you would betray me with your ex-boyfriend. I treated you like a queen. I’ve given you anything you asked for. And now this is how you repay me? He continued to yell then he turns to Justin and yells “You are a low life of a husband you are not even divorced yet and you already moving on. I don’t care if my sister slept with your brother but two wrongs don’t make a right. What hypocrisy!” with that he grabbed the door handle and stormed out. You could hear the tires screeching.
Good scene. Keep thinking about the dialogue--it comes off as a little bit speechy, probably because the characters have a tendency to talk for longer than people usually do, and to ask a lot of rhetorical questions without any comment from the other person. As far as the outline goes, I expect you mean that the bulk of the story takes place in the sentence 'sparks fly.' Is that right? If not you should consider how you'll tell the story--perhaps you already know, but the plot summary here spans an impressive amount of time, and you'll want to decide where you'll focus and where you'll summarize.
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