PLOT:
On Monday, Lisa stopped by to Mc Donald to buy two ice coffees and went to take the bus to school. As Lisa went to school, she sat on the bench to have some talk with her classmate before she went to her morning class. It turns out that after her two classes, Lisa went to shoot pool with her classmate on campus and they played for hours. She made plans with him in the afternoon to watch a movie in Astoria. She went to watch a movie with her friend Adam who she had not seen in years. Lisa have seen most of the movies so they ended up watching Harry Potter. They sat in the back and then they left the theatre. They took the trains together and she had to get off at her stop and transferred to another train alone at night and that was the last time they ever saw each other.
Major Characters:
Adam is 23 years old, single. His hair was fuzzy as if he had just woke up. The converse that he wore made him look like a clown because he had big feet. His legs are hairy but he still wore shorts outside. The pants that he wore was colorful which was too much to show in public. He was growing mustache that seems like it needed to be shaved. It was a hot day and he sweat and his armpit smelled. Those glasses that he had on was pretty thick even though it were not a sunglass. However, he is confident when he talk and does most of the talking. He is pretty tall for a man’s height and is calm like a gentleman.
Lisa is 23 years old, single. Her height is five feet and two inches. She wears glasses and sometimes switches them to sunglasses. She mostly wear flip flops even though her skin is always dried. She has lot of pimples growing on her face that she sometimes wants to hide. She has bunch of blockades growing on her nose. Her skin peels off from her neck during this season and her skin is also peeling from her nose. Her calves are huge that most men would wish to have. She has lots of hairs on her arm that she lookslike an ape.
Scene:
At four o clock in the afternoon, Adrian and Lisa both met up by the movie theatre. It was a hot sunny afternoon that Lisa had her sun glasses on immediately, before they had met up. She calls him asking him where exactly he is. When she walks, his voice sounded annoyed because he kept describing these stores that she did not see. He assumed that she would know and that made her uncomfortable. They have not seen each other in years that they did not feel comfortable. They knew each other long enough but they were always friends. Since they both had recently broke up they thought of seeing each other and keeping each other’s company. As they met they both kissed on each other ‘s cheeks and then walked to the theater without talking much. They walked to the theatre while debating on what movie to watch. They waited on the line asking each other nicely without feeling selfish about choosing the movie to watch. Lisa complained about the movies and did not want to watch any since she had seen most of the ones that were being shown. The only movies that she had not seen were the Harry Potter and Bruno so she was kind enough to ask him what he wanted to watch since she didn’t have much
options left. He knew exactly what movie he wanted to watch except he was hesitating and not saying it directly to her. He waited for her to respond before he explained that he’d always love Harry Potter movie. Her sunglasses on her head acted as if it was a headband, she stared at his glasses and asked him with a confused look. She always though Harry Potter was a kid’s movie. She finally realizes that regardless both movies would have been boring to her but at least she knew that he would be happy watching it. Then he realized that he cannot watch a movie with another girl even if they were just friends. Adam apologizes to her and hopes that it will not happen again. She felt as if another guy had just walked out of her life. She could not bare to face those rejections from guys. Lisa pulls her sunglasses down and cries her way home
Thursday, July 23, 2009
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Nice start. I wonder if it all should take place on one day. You can decide as you write it, but you're putting a lot of burden on the single scene. That is, it's hard to establish their history in any other way than summary. That is if their relationship is, in your mind, the center of this story: this is the sense I get from the scene, but it's also hard to tell from the plot summary, given that equal attention is given playing pool and even going to school. What will these scenes entail? Will they consist of conversations which reflect on the central relationship?
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